looking for some opinions on a new demo

Hey Peoples! I'm always writing and recording. I never seem to take a break for long. Here and I just finished work on my debut cd "Wuss" and I'm already working on new tracks. I'm posting this one here to look for some insight, pointers, opinions, comments whatever. There's a bit of a story behind it though.

For those that took the time to read the bio on my profile (you really read it??? Wow. You like wasting time) you'll know that the name The Kerosene Man comes from a song title by Southern Voodoo (it doesn't matter if you've never heard of them, but you should look for them on my space cool music) and I wrote this as a thank you. the lead singer Do (read like doh not doo) is an aquaintance of mine and he let me use the name and he approved the song, but I want to see what other people think of it........is it metal? Probably not. It's more of a bluesy rocker than a true metal tune. But anyway, if you've got five minutes to kill, take a listen and let me know what you think.